Banana Traps (Part 4)

Posted by admin on Mar 14, 2013 in Short story | 1 comment

This is the continuation of Banana Traps (Part 1, Part 2 and Part 3).

(by Romo 9633, age 8).

They jumped into the cave. When the coast was clear the Detective, Dan and the crew member started making their way to the flaming village. The cloud was left behind.

They arrived behind the terrorists and got ready to punch them but the terrorists heard them and pushed them aside.

“Hello, my name is Jonah,” said the one terrorist dressed in black. “I’m Gwen,” said the terrorist dressed in pink. “And, I’m Bob,” said the terrorist dressed in brown. “Sorry for being such a nuisance,” they said and they swatted the crew member so hard that he fell down unconscious.  The Detective tried to punch Jonah, but Jonah pushed him aside again and the Detective fell down unconscious.

Jonah and the other terrorists were focused on the other two and they forgot about Dan. When they remembered about Dan and turned around towards him, Dan lunged and tackled them. Gwen and Bob fell back unconscious. Dan and Jonah began wrestling. Jonah swatted at Dan’s face and Dan punched Jonah. Jonah tried to punch Da,n but Dan ducked and gave Jonah a good punch in the stomach. Jonah fell back and Dan then picked him up by his collar and said, “you better leave us alone!”

Jonah woke up Gwen and Bob and they all ran. Dan helped his friends get up and said, “that should have been the hard part… but we still have the fire.”

[to be continued].

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